In review of our final video project ‘short film’ I felt it was quite clear that we manage to create a strong piece that we set out to do from the very beginning but with clear areas which needed improving. I understood that for a short film project uniqueness for a storyline was key and therefore in pre production we settled on an ambitious storyline that the whole group felt was slightly out of our comfort zone.
Fortunately the group brought each of their key skills together which resulted in many strong factors to our final pieces. The strengths we felt our final short film had was firstly good use of edit and transitions between real time scenes of our protagonist confined to his room and the fear scenes of the strangers outside of his bedroom. We created this transition by split second cuts back and forth between shots to give it a glitchy feel, the effect was also enhanced along with the much different sounds of each shot jumping back and forth in a very unsmooth manner; the cuts were uncomfortably quick keeping the audience alert and on edge, we felt this would be the best way to deliver the common fears to the audience.
Another strong factor with editing was the way we portrayed time. By using jump shots of Sean around his room we was able to display the effect that he had been there for a lengthy amount of time and with the pace of the shots he was beginning to get bored, therefore asking the question why doesn’t he just leave his room and getting the message across that he can’t.
With filming I felt that majority of our shots were pretty strong, for instance the opening shots of the room showing Sean’s belongings lined up neatly portrayed the protagonists personality before the audience were even introduced to him, we also managed to explain the storyline through a flash back and a very well used voice message from a police officer to Sean, a backing story that may have taken a completely different scene and structure to explain was done in a time saving and more effective way by using this technique. Also strong shots such as the silhouette of Sean sitting on his bed and the sped up shot of the mugger punching him were set up well and memorable to the audience, we found this to be proven from fed back received from a questionnaire given to our target audience.
However as said before there are clear areas within our short film that needed improving. The most obvious of these when watching the short film back was the lighting in some key scenes, although nothing could have been done at the time it will be remembered that monitor screens show darker scenes to be brighter before exporting to projectors or televisions. The only other major flaw our short film had was storyline, not so much the storyline we had come up with but how we portrayed the story to the audience, after looking at fed back it was clear that up to a quarter of the audience didn’t understand the storyline and I believe with a change of structure this problem could have been solved, however as said from the beginning this was overall and ambitious storyline to go for which we felt in most parts we managed to reach.
Through pre production researched it was clear that short films have no real codes and conventions apart from duration, and our short film defiantly managed to stay under the allowed 50 minutes. We did however follow many codes and conventions of the genre of short film, drama. Firstly our protagonist, Sean was made so that the audience can relate to him and understand his state of mind, we also wanted the audience to feel the emotions he felt, this was done through the most obvious, acting and also music. The soft dramatic piano music throughout the piece (although arguably to long and continues) created the mood and atmosphere we was hoping for. The structure of the short film also followed convention of most film, short and feature length of equilibrium, disequilibrium followed by equilibrium, the beginning being slow and calm to then quick cuts between fear scenes and concluding with a calm decision of the protagonist to finally leave the room. One thing i also picked up on when studying short films was that due to the restrictions on time as much of the story as possible had to be told in each shot, i feel we also used this pattern with shots such as the opening panning shots to portray the protagonists personality as well as the flash back to the mugging scene.
I felt that each group member pulled their own weight in this project, maybe not in all the same areas but undoubtedly though out the whole project. My own individual contribution started in pre production by firstly concentrating on our protagonist and his personality, i started by giving his name and appearance by putting together clothes his would wear and a short paragraph on his background i also thought it would contrast to the weird and messy storyline that he has strange obsessions with neatness and clear signs of OCD. I then went on to create a short video with Niall on fears by interviewing members of the college, we edited the video together and it proved to be quite useful in our presentation to the class. Throughout the filming stages of the project I found myself doing a lot of organizing based on actors and props I also drove to collect members of the group, actors, props and taking us all to each individual location, although not a major part in media it was a necessity to our schedule for filming. When filming I took on board major shots that we needed for our short film such as filming, opening scenes, shots that were later used for jump cuts to show passing of time, close ups of Sean and mugging shots such as sped up punch from me punching the camera. I was also the actor for our mugger in the short film. During editing I structured the opening shots as well as our title, music was left to other members of the group so i made sure i edited some of our keys shots, for instance I put together majority of the shots which portrayed Sean being bored in the room (jump cuts) and not being able to leave the room, I also tweak speed in the shot of me punching Sean and contributed in bringing together the overall structure.