Enough from Tor Kristoffersen on Vimeo.
“Enough” is a 90 second dramatic short directed by Tor Kristoffersen. The piece was awarded shortlist 2008 winner on Depict! A website specialised in ultra short films, films that last under 90 seconds. The short is based around the subject of knife crime an issue found in headlines every week in Britain. With ultra shorts each shot must tell as much of the story as possible due to the duration and I feel this piece works with them constraints better than most others from the website.
The film starts with a shot of a middle aged man awoken by the sound of youths outside his front door, we are then shown these youths who in a gang are viciously attacking another youth, the shot then jumps back to the man who we now see is clutching a glass of alcohol, with the time of day shown to the audience with use of sunlight through the window it is visibly clear that the man is an alcoholic. The shots then cut quickly from the man to the gang until the man approaches the youths and the gang decided to run. After attempting to help the victim the shot returns to the man’s house where he opens a suitcase containing a police officer’s uniform and a baton this shot, after clutching the baton the camera cuts to a school picture of a young boy, the audience are expected to put two and two together that the victim beaten by the gang was possibly his son or his son was a victim to previous knife crime from the gang. In just a limited amount of shots a quit complex story is explained by the contents of each shot. The man lost his son to knife crime which result in him picking up a drinking problem this later caused him being fired from the force and all the while having to live on a street where gang culture is popular, reminding him of his loses every day. At the point where the coin drops and the audience put together the shots to work out the story the words Enough appear on the screen and the man decides to peruse the gang after finding them he approaches the one carrying the knife at the beginning and threatens him with the baton whilst repeatedly asking for the knife, the camera shots speed up as the confrontation takes place to go with the confusion, anger and frustration of the situation, soon enough a close up shows one of the gang stabbing the man and as he falls to the ground the gang run much like the fight at the start of the film however this time the boy being confronted doesn’t run he stands still before assisting the man and shouting dad, this is when the tables turn and the story the audience thought they had cleverly put together gets quickly diverted, whilst the audience are still shocked and realise the man was not suffering a loss but frustration and misery his once young son is now part of a gang and carrying a knife the sounds of the cries for help slowly fade out as the picture turns to black. I think this piece proves that with the right shots and contents even a 90 second film can carry a complex story and can pack a powerful punch with a smart twist.